Your thoughts on my song - I Would Forever And Ever Love You

[SenseiSteve]

I wrote this song after awaking from an impossible dream.

Lyrics:
You know I am so hopelessly in love
And if I could wish upon a star above
I would wish my whole life through
To spend forever with you

I want to be your closest friend and more
A forever love to the woman I adore
Sharing each other's life's journey
Down on one knee asking, will you marry me

This promise to you I make
With every breath that I take
I will love and cherish you
I will forever and ever love you

And then I awake and realize
It is all an impossible lie
The woman I adore it seems
Is just another hopeless dream

If ever a dream could come true
I would wish that woman was you
I would wish my whole life through
To spend forever and ever with you

This promise to you I would make
With every breath that I take
I would love and cherish you
I would forever and ever love you

This promise to you I would make
With every breath that I take
I would love and cherish you
I would forever and ever love you

I hope you like it

Your honest opinion please.